"WRITING" ABOUT OUR EXPERIMENT

We had to cups of water.
Then we put some salt in the cup of water.
Then we mixed the salt water.
Then we put straws with playdough on the end of the straw.
Then we put them in the cups.
The straws floated in the cups.
The one in the salt water floated higher than the other.
by JoJo

Today we did an experiment on water.
We are learning about fresh water and salt water.
Mrs M got some hot water, and salt and a spoon.
Mrs M put hot water in the cups, and we put salt water in one of the cups.
Mrs M put seven spoons full of salt.
The cup with salt water in it was cloudy.
Mrs M had two straws and two pieces of play dough.
She put them in the salt water and fresh water.
The one in the salt water floated higher than the one in the fresh water.
by Jody

Today we did an experiment.
We got two straws with playdough on the ends of them.
Before we did that we had some fresh water and salt water.
Then we put the straws in it.
The salt water is stronger than the fresh water because Mrs M put 7 spoons of salt in it.
The straw floated higher in the salt water than the fresh water.
by Kara

Mrs M got two cups.
Then Mrs M put hot water and fresh water in the cups.
We made salt water and we mixed them together.
The salt water dissolved.
Then it was dense and the salt water went cloudy.
The salt water was strong and it got stronger.
Mrs M had two straws and we put playdough on the straws.
We discovered if we put salt it made stuff float higher.
by Laudis